Synthoxin

So I just tried out this game and for a RPG Maker, it's really good.
Not a cheap clone, however not a masterpiece like To The Moon.
But as you said, "second project".

Story:
It has a slow pace and build up, but it's worth it. Especially the poems scattering around hints about what is true or not. It's an interesting concept to deliver a story like this. Kind of scary to think people suffer to diseases similar like this. 

Graphics:
As I said, not a cheap clone! No RTP tilesets, no large empty maps.

However, you could add some more detail and attention to mapping, but it's good overall.

Music:
I'm guessing you're not much of a composer.
At least it's not another RPG Maker game soundtrack, however you may want to explore into other DAWs like LMMS.
But it's mediocre overall.

Gameplay:
Sort of limited. It's better then reading massive chunks of text, or having another typical RPG Maker battle scene.

You should probably invest more into gameplay. However in general, for a game that's meant to be a story narrative, it's ok.

Overall, the story is the main focus, and the graphics are nice, but gameplay and music, needs to improved for future games. 

Would recommend people this game if they want a nice story and have an hour or two to spend.